Mount Wachusett Community College, in Gardner MA offers a 2-year program for Graphic and Interactive Designers (GID program). The final course in the GID program helps students assemble and present their best work produced in the program. This blog is produced by the GID Portfolio class under the direction of instructor Coni Porter.
Kristen - the image composite is really good, and the typography seems well-placed and styled. The only last remaining detail is the Design Change logo on the phone. It seems a bit big for the space, and of course… there is the color that seems not to belong to the color palette of the ads. Would you consider dropping the words in the logo, and using dark grey or black for the icon? Place it in a way that seems to unify with the phone’s colors… yet will be seen. To get the Design Change wording back in - consider running “DesignChange.com” under the word “Could” or “Talk” depending on where you have room. Small changes, but important ones.
Kristen - the image composite is really good, and the typography seems well-placed and styled. The only last remaining detail is the Design Change logo on the phone. It seems a bit big for the space, and of course… there is the color that seems not to belong to the color palette of the ads. Would you consider dropping the words in the logo, and using dark grey or black for the icon? Place it in a way that seems to unify with the phone’s colors… yet will be seen. To get the Design Change wording back in - consider running “DesignChange.com” under the word “Could” or “Talk” depending on where you have room. Small changes, but important ones.
ReplyDeleteThis will be a strong piece in your book.