Mount Wachusett Community College, in Gardner MA offers a 2-year program for Graphic and Interactive Designers (GID program). The final course in the GID program helps students assemble and present their best work produced in the program. This blog is produced by the GID Portfolio class under the direction of instructor Coni Porter.
Friday, April 27, 2018
Henry David Thoreau
I wanted to share my David Thoreau spread. I would love some feedback before I print on Monday. All feedback is welcomed.
The type on the second spread is well placed and very readable. Nice. I'm wondering if the Statue of Liberty's torch is a bit too small, and too dark in the first picture. Would that not be a good focal point for the composition? Don't play this down, no reason in my opinion to be subtle with this element. It is the element that should be bold, large and allow the viewer to ask "what the heck is that?"... drawing us into the second image.
The type on the second spread is well placed and very readable. Nice. I'm wondering if the Statue of Liberty's torch is a bit too small, and too dark in the first picture. Would that not be a good focal point for the composition? Don't play this down, no reason in my opinion to be subtle with this element. It is the element that should be bold, large and allow the viewer to ask "what the heck is that?"... drawing us into the second image.
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