Mount Wachusett Community College, in Gardner MA offers a 2-year program for Graphic and Interactive Designers (GID program). The final course in the GID program helps students assemble and present their best work produced in the program. This blog is produced by the GID Portfolio class under the direction of instructor Coni Porter.
Saturday, February 24, 2018
Here is my Baseball Tour 12 brochure it may look a bit strange in the jpeg because it laid flat out instead of folded how its supposed to be. Anyways let me know what you all think.
I really like how this came out John. I am not sure If I would make any changes honestly. I would include maybe a photo of what it looks like folded so that digitally you can see it when put together.
Johnathan - I’m reading some of this upside down… so make sure I see this printed, so I can proof it more closely. Some small changes:
1. Cover: the small word “Tour” sits below the title all by itself. A weak foundation of the title element. Either break the line after the “&”, rewrite the title, or move “Baseball & Travel” above “Tour 12”.
2. I think I see the “&” sitting on its own line under “Jay Buckley’s Tours”… don’t let this happen.
3. Tour Schedule… all caps isn’t as inviting to read as upper/lower case. Consider enlarging pt size and using bold if needed… make this a easy to read as possible. Also, rewrite the text if needed, so that the columns align at bottom - you may not need to after making font changes.
4. Back cover - float some light color on this so it appears to belong to the project. Grey? Also - take a look at how a USPS mailing panel has to be set up, and design this accordingly. I’ll post one now, so take a look.
I really like how this came out John. I am not sure If I would make any changes honestly. I would include maybe a photo of what it looks like folded so that digitally you can see it when put together.
ReplyDeleteJohnathan - I’m reading some of this upside down… so make sure I see this printed, so I can proof it more closely. Some small changes:
ReplyDelete1. Cover: the small word “Tour” sits below the title all by itself. A weak foundation of the title element. Either break the line after the “&”, rewrite the title, or move “Baseball & Travel” above “Tour 12”.
2. I think I see the “&” sitting on its own line under “Jay Buckley’s Tours”… don’t let this happen.
3. Tour Schedule… all caps isn’t as inviting to read as upper/lower case. Consider enlarging pt size and using bold if needed… make this a easy to read as possible. Also, rewrite the text if needed, so that the columns align at bottom - you may not need to after making font changes.
4. Back cover - float some light color on this so it appears to belong to the project. Grey? Also - take a look at how a USPS mailing panel has to be set up, and design this accordingly. I’ll post one now, so take a look.