I just wanted to share my first and second projects that I edited with the help of your feedback. Let me know what you think and if you see any minor changes I should make before I put this in the "Done with this folder."
Magazine project
Design Change
Jamaal - looking good!
ReplyDeleteBlank Canvas: last page. The text wrap probably should be increased on the right side, to give that artwork a bit more space. Look at the right size with its ragged right it visually leaves more space than we see on the right. You have the space on the page at the bottom of the right hand column… so push that type away (at least double what is there, if not more) and let it wrap down the page.
Hope Jacket: Please capitalize the “H” in “homeless” a the top left of the page, in that running border text.
That’s it… after these details you can mark them DONE!
Sorry - I meant to say "look at the left side with its ragged right edges, and the the visually larger negative space it leaves next to the image..."
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DeleteOkay I will look into that. Thank you !
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